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| Can You Describe This Waterfall? |
| 04.18.04 (8:10 pm) [edit] |
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Awesome Writers,
:lol: I saw the terrific descriptions you did on your Habitat blog! Now I want to see your "show, not tell" writing when describing the picture of this waterfall. Hey, let me give it a try:
"I couldn't believe my eyes as I stood at the top of the covered bridge watching the powerful force of the waterfall. I saw blue water streaming from the top of the falls but by the time it got to the bottom, it looked like fluffy, white marshmallows! "
OK, now you try! :wink:
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